Dark Beach: A Coastal Carolina Romantic Mystery, Book 2 (Unabridged)
Author: Doug Burris Date: 2015 Narrator: Anna Starr Provider: Doug Burris Running Time: 5 h 04 min Audible Enhanced Audio Dark Beach is book two of the Coastal Carolina Romantic Mystery series. Book one of the series, Young Love Lost, is a previous #1 in Kindle Top 100 Free with more than 100,000 downloads. For your best enjoyment, the series should be heard in order, although Dark Beach can be a stand-alone… What happens when the quiet coastal town of Atlantic Beach, North Carolina, is terrorized by a sadistic killer? David Jennings and Mary Roberts expected their life to return to normal after devastating events nearly tore them apart. But moving forward isn’t easy with the ghost of their past still haunting them. Mary is trying to forget the past, but David is stuck there. Then one dark night, as he strolls along the beach, David discovers the body of a missing mayor. Her death was brutal, and it has people whispering about cults, Satanists, and witches. As the bodies begin to pile up, fears spiral out of control. Witches are called out, but Mary doesn’t believe the nature-loving Wiccans she knows could be so evil. Dark Beach is a romantic suspense that will keep you on the edge of your seat to the bitter end.
This is one of those books that is difficult for me to review, because it is a “borderline” book. There are elements in it that appealed to me very much, and others that emphatically didn’t. I had not read the first book in this series, but the author made it easy enough for me to orient myself and catch up on past events, without detracting from the new story.
While some of the plotting was excellent and nicely complicated, it wasn’t as developed as I like. For a mystery plot to work, there should be some strong foundations, so that, when everything is complete, we can trace the indications of the villain’s identity back through well placed incidents in the book, and that foundation just wasn’t there. Oh, there were hints about the perpetrator, but they were entirely too fleeting, and too vague, because when we learned the motivation, it came as a surprise, and I found myself thinking “where did *that* come from?” Also, although the author uses some standard devices they aren’t used very effectively. Again, having the least suspicious of the cast the perpetrator isn’t new by any stretch, but in this case, it just wasn’t grounded thoroughly enough.
Also, with a few exceptions, many of the characters were one dimensional and almost “off the shelf”. Had this book been just a bit more thorough in its construction, and the characters been a bit more 3 dimensional, this could have been a really fine mystery story, because all the elements are there, as well as both a lovely setting and the addition of what turned out to be both a minor distraction and a unique side plot.
I did very much like the way the author handled the relationship of the main characters, and the way they resolved, or at least began the process of resolving, the effects of their past traumas.
I have always maintained that a narrator’s performance couldn’t ruin a book for me, but the performance of this narrator very nearly did. For one thing, I found her voice unpleasant, (though that is my personal taste, and has nothing to do with her abilities). It is too high and too child like for me to listen to for extended periods of time. Also, her rate of speech was too fast, she slurred her words, and her expression was flat.
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